I'm going to have to slow down and pay more attention to my commentary. Some of it's ludicrous, some overwrought, much of it wordy because I've not taken the time to locate one word or phrase to either capture or freeze-frame the idea in question. I've been cranking stuff out too fast in order to concentrate on reading, and the lack of editing is leaving behind too many howlers. Not to mention content's getting repetitive and consistently shallow. Biff...